Tumultuous waves of the coral sea
merge and break against the mute rocks
An uproar.Oh! a magnified uproar
reaches the depths of the depthless skies
dependent,vacant and tearless.they cry
Why the gales float?suspended animation
and quivering at every turn.They seek to
find an oblivion of the patient shore.
Petrified
Amused
Desolate
Dead.
And the winds scream the hollow terror
unheard,unseen the ghost of the distant pasts
unfurled beyound the horizon
and the carcass of our golden dreams lie
Unclaimed
Rotting
Forgotten
Decaying.
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If I have got it right which I think I did, I think its better to let those things turn to dust. Nobody wants, understands or feels them anymore. Or rather pretend to not.
who cares for these 'nobodies' anyways?
Great words!! I like your blog!
i have a prob
i dunno how to lie
so i will say nutting at all
Ash u write too well u should publish a poetry book.
This poem sort of related to how I feel every now and then...so many dreams lie unclaimed, rotten, forgotten and decaying...I really love the last line...it gives a face to my mysterious feelings. Marvellous work Ash!
Keshi.
Ash may I copy this into my poetry collection...I promise it will be there with 'Ash' as the soul owner of it :)
Keshi.
those last four words were powerful and dramatic. a fitting close.
bm,the necessary movement--thanks.i appreciate it.
saby--just say it.
keshi--i'm glad you like my words.and ofcourse you can use it in your poetry collection.
transience--i know we call can relate to the last words.isn't it?
the loss of innocense cannot be expressed more by the loss of dreams.
love d style of d poem..u write beautiful stuff :)
it was ever thus;for you;for me;for them............
dreams ,which were unclaimed.
weaving the songs ,
symphonies, melancholies,so blazed.
with bated breaths and heaved silences.
we r waiting fr the nirvana 2 b attained.
the effulgence of death cant b retained
but its for u my dear
keep the hope alive
from the ashes decayed.:))
I want to have sex wid you
ash....well written....the depths of the depthless skies,dependent, vacant, tearless. liked this line:) ...classy
bismuth--dreams,hope,glory..whatever.loss of innocence,loss of life?
--pearl--..thanks.i'm glad you liked it.
word_smith--i didn't understand what you meant.
Sebia--smiles. you too have this gift of words,when you want to use 'em.
feathered_mask--i'm soo glad to see you back.And yeah,your observation is very true.there is beauty in absolutes.Thats all i know.
stacey--i'm game for a one-night stand,if you're pretty.
classy--good to have you back.and thanks.
lol jules
julia--i can stand bitches only for one night.
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