Friday, June 03, 2005

Dots in the sky.

The unbridged distances between us
linger on and finally merge into oblivion
in my sleep
A sleep of dreams,fluttering butterfly wings
of eyelids.Soft and colorful
like our future.
Fragile are my dreams,my angel
and tattered are your wings
Relentlessly,the concrete of the roads
try to ashen our hopes.
Entomb me in the ocean of your love
and drape our hope
in the safe womb of your faith.
Scarlet virgin blood of our angst
will dissolve the grey of sadness.
You and I will smile
We will--you'll see,my deartest.

20 comments:

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{illyria} said...

i love how this is both raw and edgy and soft. the reference to butterfly wings offsets your words.

De.vile said...

Aww. Lil ashikins got so mushy :)

sandeip said...

love this poem.about time u got some hope in there.

one of your best poems just for the promise it bears.

messys musings said...

very beautiful..

Ashes said...

anonymous@9:22--???

transience--yeah raw,edgy and soft..alomost bi-polar,isn't it.very me!

de.vile--*smiles*..see lovey, it proves that even 'walls' have hearts.whadya think?

word_smith--thanks.there are times when i do get hopeful and sentimental.

musings--thank you.

Jim said...

YIPPEEE !
ashes finally came out of the cold,
ashikins..hehehehe ,....

hey Devile u need to kick in the butt

dont make him embarassed,
its OK to full in love
and hope to get married someday
and smile like 2 love birds

Jim said...

i mean u need a kick on yr butt

--pearl-- said...

awww ash...dats suchh an adorable poem..atleast i understood this one d first time i read it lol:P

u should write more of such stuff/...suits u much more :)

--pearl-- said...

happy for ya :)

De.vile said...

methinks the poems great then walls with hearts are odd. Not that Im complainin...

Anonymous said...

i can see people get happy when u write anything that bears hope :)...... "Fragile are my dreams,my angel and tattered are your wings" found it very poetic....classy

Anonymous said...

Scarlet virgin blood of our angst
will dissolve the grey of sadness.

i love that line....shows quite a different side of you...a happyish side...that hasn't lost faith in hopes, dreams, life...nice to hear...and it doesn't even sound fake....quite heartfelt...

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Ashes said...

Saby--don't count on it.

--pearl--..*smiles* thanks.I was serene when i wrote that poem.i'm glad you liked it.

de.vile--yeah,they are odd.But oddballs do exist.

classy--yeah it's something which makes me uneasy.I am a sort of he-is-a-death-gloom-worshipping-manic depressive' to most.i'[m just manic-depressive.Happiness feels good to me too.But the thing is..i can't seem to hold it for long.

shyamla--nah i haven't lost faith.I believe in love and hope and happiness .maybe more than most.maybe thats the whole point.but oh well..thats me.!

Anonymous said...

well okay then you ARE full of hope and faith ....bah....
just nice to see you show it every once in a while

Jim said...

'those who love deeply
hurt deeply'

i just figured out ASHES

he has been hurt by his first love
but he is recovering

Keshi said...

i feel love-drugged :)

Keshi.

Ashes said...

Shyam--*smiles*

Saby--nah,i'm not the romantic-who-is-the-way-he-is-cuz-he-lost-his-love..that would be a nice excuse.and i don't hide behind excuses.

Keshi--hehe you must listen to NIN's live song 'Love is the Drug'

Mallika said...

ofcourse we will darling