He laughed
Sudden,unforseen,unfanthomed
a happy uneventful laugh
and noone saw it,expect the crack in the wall
a slight,unassuming,ugly little crack
Almost dignified in it's incompleteness
almost wistful.
And then no one saw the tears
mild,salty and fresh.something caved in?
the nakedness of the skin
and the coldness of the polished floor
Lying there he smiled and cried
smiling at the ugly crack
almost dignified
almost wistful.
and crying at the word 'almost'.
A cruel word.A cruel world
6 comments:
Yep, lonely, so very lonely.
Beautiful paint though.
**and noone saw it,expect the crack in the wall..
sometimes the walls listen better...
Essence of loneliness beautifully put.
Keshi.
wow. the picture punctuates your words.
de.vile--yeah,it's like being naked and wanting to hide.The panic.the vomit
keshi--the essence of lonliness can't be out in words.It just flows out thru tears or plastic smiles.
transience--yeah,paranoid.isn't it?
when u mentioned crack
i didnt imagine it was just a crack in the wall
Ash tears n plastic smiles maybe...but loneliness knows no fake people too...isnt that better?
Keshi.
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