Harmless,is that what you think?
A fireflying ; quivering and breathing low
almost dead on the porcelain
criss cross of the hand.
Harmless.Maybe trivial.
There are no requiems
no hymns and no mourners
And so I mourn for the little light angel
Sweeping in a violent emotion
the crystal bowl shines a mocking smile.
Hark! it says
"Death consumes the fire of everyone.
And lifeless,lightless and faceless she died.
What tortures might have snuffed
her glistening body into weightless,
formless and senseless contour
which rises to meet the heaven."
The cruel bowl shall die into million pieces
the insolence of his truth humilates
and enrages me
A beautiful monster that mocks the deaths
is so fragile against a sudden
jerk of my hand.
Laughter
Crash!
death!
Silence.
Now I have three dead
Firefly,crystal bowl and his impertinence
15 comments:
Its so beautiful. I was hoping to hear what anyone has to say to this.
the last line was wondrous. and the impertinence, god, it was such a saucy choice of word that i am in awe.
This was very beautiful indeed.Those claim to be all mighty meets the end disastrously..
lovely.... loved the last line of impact .... classy
de.Vile,
where were u so long ?
esp. when the lights went out in mumbai
come clean
any way we will no after 9 months
dont blame u
TOI says a baby boom is expected then
Now I have three dead
, , Firefly,crystal bowl and his impertinence , ,
loved dis last lines
esp. bcoz i new dat the post is over
Wat say De Vile is dat or isnt dat a good critical review?
BULL SHIT!
Transience is always in AWE
i have yet to see a girl who can keep her mouth open for so long
de.vile--*smiles* and *bows*
transience--I have left awed many times when I had visited yer blog.It's good to get one back.Thanks.
anonymous@04:36--all mighty MUST end in disaster.It's a beautiful balance you see.
classy--good to have you on this space again.I appreciate that you found it lovely.
anonymous@05:27--I am reminded of a movie called 'Dumb and Dumber'
Saby--*smiles*..and *duh!*
anonymous--That girl is Bjork.And she's twisted.In a good kinda way.
heyyyy ASHES,
honestly dis post is good
bcoz it was tinged wid a pinch of humor
De Vile needs to learn
if it is all sadness
it is self-pity
dat is distasteful;
the Sylvia Plath diary is total self pity
only a masocist wud want to read it
i just read a few pages
and i threw it away
DONT EVER READ IT
if ur feeling sad
heyyy ASHES,
can i add u as my friend?
SHIT ! why am i asking
i already did
http://imnutsincaps.blogspot.com/2005/07/my-new-friendz.html
Saby--I think de.vile is awesome.And I love her writing sense.
And whats with you always equating me and S.Plath.I don't intend to be a victim of self-pity rising to the level of suicide,nor i have intensions of killing weak ppl by writing something on virtues of dying.
I saw yer 'new friends' link..it's sweet and kinda dumb.But then so are you.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA ..
I LIKE DAT,
if i were gay
i wud say i love u
***Now I have three dead
Firefly,crystal bowl and his impertinence
Gosh lov those words! How creative!
Keshi.
a beautiful poem.it has all of your old touch and mastery of words.
the thoughts;well;to me they tastify life.not life as in living;but life as we witness it.
a bit of cruelty too;but i suppose cruelty is essential in this life also.it reminds me of a phrase i read long back........"we all were acceptable losses in an unacceptable war".
it referred to athe vietnam war.
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