Something I wrote sometime back.
Disquietude…
As you fly through my mind,
unbinding its tortuous tangents;
effusing it with love.
Discomfiture…
As you inflict my core
with senseless emotion,
and promptly dishevel life’s banalities.
Desolation…
As you swim the expanse
of my inchoate heart,
and you part its nebulous waters;
riving it in two.
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My random mind-echoes and happy whispers.All of it and some madcap laughs.Welcome all.I hope ya'll love it,and even if ya don't..i don't give a ****(you know it).
Mellon Collie
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22 comments:
as u said 'wat i rite is rarely understood'
but i tot lang was a means of communication
mebbe u want to communicate to only like minded souls
(ass holes i mean)
take a tip from the parables of christ
he didnt use expressions like
inchoate heart,
and you part its nebulous waters;
riving it in two.
and the Biblle is the most widely read book
second only to the Kamasutra
Why do you define things. I thought you hated philosophy
what angers is
u dont listen or u look for solutions
forget this crap..
lets talk about sex;what say Saby?
tell me 1 best position to take on ur lover
waiting for keshi to comment and have sum funnnnnn ;yaaaawnnnn!
anonymous 7:27pm u love me dun u? lol i luv u too for luvving me this crazily :)
Ash...Unrest, anxiety and misery..sometimes we get too friendly with them...its ok but dun let em change ur life into one of unrest, anxiety and misery too...
Keshi.
tortuous tangents. wow.
somehow,ash;i dunno why;the thought seems incomplete.beautiful though it is;there seems to be lot that is still left to be said.
Saby--*spits*
Saby@6:11---Christ slept with Mary Megdeline.she just acted celibate.i can't stand fakeness,even if He was Christ himself.
de.vile--i didn't hate it.i don't see the use of it.
anonymous--i am trying,belive me.
anonymous@12:55--sex is overrated.and if you 'talk' about it means you don't get it much.which isn't surprising.no one lays anonymous.and that goes out for all the anonymouses there.
keshi--hehe yeah they do.they flatter 'emselves.
transient--smiles.
word_smith--i told ya..i like sudden ends in poems,in films and in life.
He may have wid Mary Magdalene
but dat take does not take away one bit of His wisdom
He never ever preached celibacy
it is the poor padres who took the oath of celibacy
poor suckers
and no one is stopping u from sleeping wid any Mary
noing u
u will sleep and snore too
Im sorry ash
fuck all dis crap
yeah annony mouse
lets talk about SEX !
do u tink ashes gets any ?
ashes gets an erection which as soon as his girl friend tries to mouth it , it turns into ashes.
hahaha and HAHAHA ..
dat was good funn
i love good funnincaps
hey ashes
u shud tank God (or yr stars) dat i am not a xtian fanatic
else, i wud have given u a taste of the passion of christ
wat u saw in the eyes of mel gibson is only the sanitized version
real pain centres are the balls and the ass
then u wud understand wat is desolation and disquietude and discomfiture
and u wud rite better stuff
http://it-committee-n-community.blogspot.com/2005/05/mrs.html
hey saby and something waiting for u there. LOL!
hey guyz
have to give credit to ash for his honesty and frankness
he will never hide
his poetry , writings speak his mind
dis is something positive about him
but just dat even i hate his negativity
vell ... ash realise dat life is worse than u have
consider handicap people
many die every moment
undergo tremendous pain
many unsure whther gonna get to eat for evening
atleast u got a internet connection
its all pain ..but few remain positive ash.
write positive
dont say "I cant"
say "I should"
try to see positive ..even if it is fake to u..try to be fake and one day u will abide to it.
make a poem of HOPE and something ..
u can surely try ..
I dont have proper words
but see positivity thats wat i mean.
dats how it is ..
More dead than a nail
heart took out too
too many times
what clochard is that?
what cliché is that?
___ I am forbidden to write a poem!
Judas Priest
Saby--i'd love a Christ who slept around,but then he never smiled..or did he?I never saw a smiling pic of him..let alone laughing.He was a living embodiment of pain and suffering and I was made to wear a reminder of HIS pain and HIS suffering when I was little.I tore off the cross as soon as I realised the folly and dad thought i was a into satan.duh! him.
And i DID sleep with Mary..the last name was not Megdeline though.
anonymous@11:57 --smiles.it's okay.I guess i appear too cocky sometimes.it's a front which helps you see.
Saby@1:22-- yeah i do.i'm immoral and girls think i'm handsome,so I get it.
anonymous@3:55--your imagination is funny.You're into Harry Potter and stuff?
Saby@8:01-- know what, sometimes i think you actually ARE some xtian fanatic.But yeah you can't touch me.Dad gives around 100k in us$ to the roman chruch annually.
anonymous@9:06 --now listen once and for all..i never complained that my life sucks.It's just that I am bored of it.And why the fuck should I be compassionate to the poor and handicap.I'm not kind.and yeah you got it right..i can't fake.and listen i WON'T fake.So stop putting me in the 'rich-who-got-it-all-but-are-still-cribbing' label.I don't complain.I just vent.
Judas priest--hehe talking of Christ,can Judas be far behind.
ASHES,
u havent heard the last of me
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