With what sleepless nights
the Gods above created flowers
A dreamy sketch,soft globes
faint,featherlike whispers
too fragile to the touch,these petals
evanescent in their freshness
they fill me with tears.
They fill me with tears
these lovely flowers.yellow,red and white
and some faded.They are dead.
Sharing space with their brothers
too timid in their faded beauty,sinking in their ugliness
For them,the most,my eyes go moist.
won't they feel so lonely?
won't they feel so lonely?
these odourless.lifeless,beauties
limp in their shame,they hang their heads low
Their skin still so soft,so tender
bereft of the Spirit-Goddess they wonder
what human hand would throw them in the bin
so they turn to dust,to become fragile again
fresh again,and loved again.
The dead brothers-in-fate,I weep for you.
I love you.
17 comments:
tears, weeping, .....
Heyy ashes,
i see the sun shining,
i see new buds forming
from where the flower dropped
i see beauty even in dying
OK OK OK
i felt wat ur feeling
but dat was a long time ago
there are soo many guys who love u
for wat ur
wat more u want ?
u said u dont want love
u dont want charity
but u fucking ass
LOVE is not sharity
when i was in dire straits
i didnt get love from family and friendz
but the guy above
pulled me up
He will do dat for u too
and it isnt charity
He loves u
u asshole !
Ashes,
if dis is just putting on the role to rite good sad poetry
it cud be risky
very soon like all good actors
u become the person u play
i saw dis in the performance of SRK in Devdas and Darr
take care ASSHOLE!
we love u
Saby--*smiles* i think I remarked in one of my comments that your heart is in the right place,it's just that yer brain is screwed.You prolly are a bit patronising to me..you see some similarities.I don't know.Maybe I would be like you when i am old.
But fuck that I won't be old.
**so they turn to dust,to become fragile again...fresh again,and loved again
Hate that cycle...I think God was drunk when he designed the wheel of Life.
Nice poem Ash.
your words resonate with me. that was a beautiful tribute.
zombie--ah! misty_lilac,long time no see.I'm glad to see you.
Keshi--haha,a drunken God.I love that image.
transience--yes,sometimes the tributes hide the ugliness of death.
*smiles*...i always feel good when you drop in.
ah ash..I am drunk lately..I feel so.The world is spinning briskly and it is hard to keep pace..I am growing old too.I have lost stability..and I am writhed in excruciating agony and sucked in a whirlpool of love lorn world..
Keshi
It isnt drunk, maybe mid-life reality bites, kesh
**It isnt drunk, maybe mid-life reality bites, kesh
chikka u said it!well ..you are just in the teens girl:) it is a rollicking period of ur life..for me?my life has been little screwed up..and I dont understand..my past haunts me..weird thoughts have taken control of my head.I cant keep my emotions pent-up.I want to be released..just like a drunkard
lets go of his emotions and set himself free...
Keshi
keshhh
stop crying
i am ready to offer u my shoulder
diffy dont be silly!
read again ,,
i said SHOULDER
u dirty Indian male
evry body will become old like me someday
while i continue to grow younger
its worse for woomen
breasts start to sag
and ASS too
is Kesh growing old too?
she will need wonder bra then
ITCC post 100 comments pretending to be me, but u remain the same shit and I remain the power that annoys the hell out of u lol!
Keshi.
keshi-- the disorientation will pass soon.It's not age,and certainly not mid-life thingy,which lovey said..it's just disillusion.You'll come to terms with it Keshi.Just hang in.
de.vile--*smiles* oh lovey,it that feeling is mid-life crisis,then I suffer it on daily basis and come out of it too.
ha! but then i can hide in the blanket of "look me is manic-depressive"
to anonymous Vs Keshi banter--guys,please for fucks sake...
love d style of d poem.It's awesum!
Both in the vastness and the richness of the visible universe the invisible God is adumbrated.
ASHHHH lol it wasnt me who wrote that comment to Chikka...someone's acting like me!! ofcourse its that moron ITCC.
The only way u could know the aunthenticity of the comments is by allowing profile pics Ash.
Keshi.
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