To move into a slow phase
I rather stand at the gates
And no one can see thru
locked are the soul-mirrors
Rough boney fingers,streching
and a little more,for a grasp.
When you take everything out of nothing
nothingness still survives.
For such is the effect of love
and such is the effect of wine
Casually I send spiralling puffs
tracks of long lost years they leave.
Steady the ocean which heaves
in the eyes of the beholder
No more I care for release
I surrender to my abode
I hold my head high
where the silences shriek and hopes die.
27 comments:
the last line was powerful. well done, ashes.
sexy poetry
*When you take everything out of nothing
nothingness still survives.*
Love it. The rest is well, a state, cant comment.
i dont no why
i dont no whyyyy
... dis Ashes posts such creepy pics
i loved the text though
wont some one tell Transcience to shut her mouth !
oooppss ! i didnt mean it dat way
wat she says is good
i mean the slow opening and closing of mouth
she looks like a fish in water
Dear Ashes and his types,
dis is gonna be a long letter Ashes,
grab a chair, a Coke and a burger
why do u guys rite?
as i understand it
riting is communication wid a purpose
my purpose is to change the world
get guys to see the world in my eyes
see the mistakes i made
and hope u guys will learn from my mistakes
but Alas !
youth never lissens
but i gotta say it nevertheless
in your case i see no purpose
except mebbe impress impresionable girls
wid wat a great riter u guys are
Vanity of vanities
all is vanity
- ecclesiastes
these days dis old man is contemplating on Love
he just turned 55 on Sept 20
but dis crazy old man
has not lost the capacity to sustain an erection and love
i love a lotta guys for a lotta reasons
i love De Vile coz she is a lost child seeking GOD only nos wat
i love Kesh coz she loves old men
i love Caraff coz she is not afraid to love
even though she been hurt before
i love Fira
coz he sometimes comes out wid very illuminating in sights
but not very often
i love Ashes
coz he been hurt in life
he figured his lyrics and guitar strumming wud make him a Rock Star
hehehe .....
now he reads sad poetry for sad ppl to read
sorry
'rites'
by standing on the gates,
u are losing ur soul in waste,
soul mirrors nt locked.
its u who is lost,
why u are carving death from life,
u are still alive,and hope always survives.
amongst the shrieks of silence,
love always thrives.
transience--thanks.
anonymous@10:21--You reckon it sexy?
de.vile--yeah, a state.Infact the whole art of poetry is a representation of states.varied and mostly tumultuous.
Saby--yeah,the pic was creepy.But i loved the 3-handed skeleton.There is an underling beauty.and the pic transience used is wonderful.Bjork is someone I never liked except in this one video.
Saby--I shall try to explain.I have no purposes.I don't want to change the world.Because they won't.I just write,and as de.vile said,i write about 'states'.It's not directed at someone,it's not a cry 'against' something or someone.Not even a whine.It's just what the 'state' is.I understand that you are right in your motives.I am not as strong and certainly not an altruist.I am selfish and I write for myself.Thats my sole purpose.Thats my soul purpose.
Happy b'day Saby.You can love me for writing sad poetry and etc.,and I love you for being a clown and pretending to be a butthead.You care,but you have your own twisted way of showing you do.I don't care and I have my own twisted way of showing I don't.
Sebia--a pleasure to have you on my blogspace and write these words.See Sebia i told you,you are wonderful when you allow yourself to be.*smiles*
OK Ashes,
lets Live and Let Live
u go your way, and
i go mine
but i gotta tell u dis
ur an asshole!
aometime back a nice girl
walked in here and asked
Ashes wanna fuck?
and u replied
only if ur pretty
i followed her
she gave me a good time
u hurt her bad Ashes
hell hath no fury like ....
i transformed the fury of a scorned wooman into Love
told her
u are an asshole
an impotent asshole
possibly gay too
Ashes ur a very immature kid,
dat invitation was not an invitation to fuck
dont lissen to words
she had no visitors to her blogg
she started the blogg to talk to ppl, to share her joys and sorrows
i met many ppl on blogg;land like dis
going thro ruff times
wid an insensitive uncaring husband
trying to find Love in dis loveless world
also lesbians and gays
who are called nasty names like dyke,etc
these are beautiful ppl inside
it is not their fault dat their sexual preferences are different
they are just built dat way
God loves dem too
and they love God too
they are very religious too
and very sensitive caring persons
but dat Rat Zingler, the current Pope is an idiot like BUSH
Saby/anonymous--do you haveta stand up for somebody else now,eh?A girl who comes upto me and askes "wanna fuck" would sure get a "only if you're pretty" or when I am in a worse moods "only when I am too drunk to care".
I sure am not gay and i don't understand gays at all.All sexual deviants are too complex for me.I sometimes abuse them but it's cuz I don't understand.If i've unintentionaly hurt any gay buddy of yours,i'm sorry.
I appreciate the fact that there are people who want love,and i sure don't want to trample on their feelings.It's just that on my bad days i shout at everyone and anyone.
Hope never dies, it dangles on a thin rope
I did not write the above comment Ash...now they r imitating my profile pic too...lol cheap thrills for cheap idiots with nuttin betta to do!
Ash if u click on the above Keshi-lover's link u will see that my profile is shamelessely copied to flaunt his stupidity and it doesnt show the blogpage link...cos it's fake.
Keshi.
i suspect she is a split personality
a Dr Jekyl and Miss Hyde
Damn u Tiger,
i didnt say she is hideous
she is pretty
pretty sexy
I know this feeling very well ashh...it's cos the pain has gotten to a point it'd numb...it doesnt hurt anymore, not cos the pain is gone, only cos ur immune to it now...nothing affects u anymore cos the height of the pain is reached and nothing else seems painful...
keshi
ashhh the crap wasnt from me...now the guy has lost it completely he's even copied my profile, pic and everything lol wut a bore.
Keshi.
ashhh the crap wasnt from me...now the guy has lost it completely he's even copied my profile, pic and everything lol wut a bore.
Keshi.
dewdrop--thats the whole point.There are no absolutes and hence no certanity.
zombie--*smiles*..ah misty_lilac,so you didn't understand the post in 'totality'..nevermind,sometimes we can't relate with 'everything'.
shut up.
go here more often Ashes
www.keshigirl.blogspot.com
ooaside from kid stuff
we do theology too
i have absolute certainty
i am 55 now
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