Sunday, July 30, 2006

Debut(bark at the moon)-The Confessions



Stop in the jammed silences
flow and then stuck
where teardrops shatters and raindrops mingle
in the aquamarine ocean
of no remorse.
I float,a drifter.


Songs drift in with the heavy air
echoes of angst
hollow paintings unfinished and some
made uglier in their completion
and the sea sleeps
I still float,with a smile.


roundness of eyes,the moonglobes
shine on me
sarcasm is the wrecked boat
love the oars,carved and old
spinning wild are the whirlpools
the confessions-I drown.


welcome us.

8 comments:

De.vile said...

Theres something about the poetry that speaks of turmoil despite numbness.

Russell CJ Duffy said...

"sarcasm is the wrecked boat
love the oars"
now that is one heck of a line. great poem too.

Jim said...

Every artist dips his brush in his own soul, and paints his own nature into his pictures.

More quotes from Henry Ward Beecher
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Jim said...

Heyyyy Ashes

How are u ?
u sonovagitch

Ashes said...

de.vile--yeah,close.

c.Jesus--thanks.and isn't it true too..sarcasm being a wrecked boat.

Saby--I'm fine.thanks for asking you sonovabitch

Sadia said...

Its always nice to be back here :) Nice words:)

Kuan Gung said...

Boy that wrecked boat...I've ben there...nice post

Ashes said...

the illusionist--thanks.and yeah nice name.

kuan gung--thanks mate.