Monday, May 09, 2005

Nameless,faceless

Insignificant,mute, transient phase
another one amidst the wide landscape
howling winds do blow,fickle,amorous
the dead leaves gather dust--oh a ghastly silence
And the tranquilty never evaporates,frigid
the ever moist eyes.Contempt.Evasion.Fear


The deadly blindness of the lonley alley
requiem to a cold womb.Dark,damp and lovely
No flutter of heavy eyelids,no heaving wings
no one flies in this barren sky;moths and ravens.
Stoned forever and jostled by nothing
the eyes stare into the void.Impregnable.

13 comments:

firacub said...

At a moment I felt I was reading muh ownself!!!!

Thanks for showing the me the mirror..


Peace,
Firacub.

Anonymous said...

i like u ashes.i like ur blog.for once, i hated u but u r not dat bad i thought to be....
atleast u got very original musings unlike keshi,qzine and the likewise.."true blogger" as someone termed you.

Keshi said...

Ash this sounds dark and lonely...

shows her middle finger to the above anonymous commentor...go now n think abt another comment for keshi lol!

Keshi.

Anonymous said...

footi you are 39 you have about another 10yrs only in this life. go to some meditation camp why mess with the kids here old man? lollllllllllllllll!

{illyria} said...

love it. more so because it has the word transient.

Ashes said...

firacub--never felt you were among the 'lost souls'.I am shocked to know that it was like a mirror to you.

anonymous@6:11--thanks for liking my blog.And yeah liking ME is superfluous.You can keep hating me,whoever you are.Makes no diff to me.Keshi and Qzine are my pals and I find 'em 'genuine'.

Keshi--yeah,it was darkish.i'm glad you found it lovely too.

anonymous---why bring footi into this.has he ever commented?.Yer rantings make no sense.

transience--I like you.more so because you like Bjork too.Army of me is a great single.And i always loved Irish people.

Anonymous said...

never mind ashes but of all the blogs i m yet to see someone soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo bothered about personal image that she chops off anythin - a wee bit against her

and ye no points for guessing
this is keshi!
that tells u how 'genuine' ur friend is

anyway u rock on!

Keshi said...

dont have to prove my genuine friendship to anone anoynymous coward..u got no balls always anonymous - basically a nameless faceless ball-less man lolz! so stop whining n grinding ur teeth in 20+ people's blogs old man.

Keshi.

Ashes said...

anonymous@1:49 and Keshi--smiles..no fights in here please.

Keshi said...

sorry ash...I will stick to what u request in future...no more fighst here even if the anonymous comments galore...lol they r free so they will use it.

Keshi.

De.vile said...

Its still water under which turbulence rises.

{illyria} said...

i like, you, too. like i like bjork. or maybe even more than that. i love irish people and how they speak gaelic.

sandeip said...

i suppose i should say something for the poem is very evocative.but i dont need words,i guess.i dont have them in any case.u know what i am gonna say...........thats life;maybe.we created it,