Sunday, April 24, 2005

It's another whisper,
a downright mute accusation
of the flowing flowers and the rainbows
in the slow moving,grinding wheel of hope
he sits;shivering,naked and blind.
Free of fear and the aspirations of the moon
he sits on the grass,frozen in wonder
or is it just boredom.
you can't ever know
a lifeless gleam sparkles his eyes
Was that the raven that cried,or the emptiness
that echoes and dies a trembling death
within the womb of the night.
And then he lies down,tired and deflated
while the sweat drops merge with the dew
and a smoke of indifference rise,from afar
mystical,shrouded in pain.A prayer leaves
the shaking lips.And then the same vacant eyes
which rise to the horizon,are frozen to the ground

Will you be there to meet him?
Must he rise alone.

7 comments:

De.vile said...

Honestly, hope kills, slowly, digging her venom into you. Too many questions.

But there is one reason you like this poem. It is like a fairy tale with a depressed character from a depressing novel for a hero. Still isnt funny.

Or maybe it's the medicine

Anonymous said...

shivering..naked and blind...!..very me!

As one who walks by the lamp's flickering blaze,
Far from the hum of men, the joys of earth--
Our mind arrives at last by tortuous ways,
At that drear gulf where but despair has birth.
E'en there, amid the darkness of that night,
When all seems closing round in empty air,
Is seen through thickening gloom one trembling light!
- from 'Tis Love's sweet memory that lingers there! P-Victor Hugo.

De.vile.. I wud state.. 'to hope is delicate suffering'.

Jim said...

dis cannot be a coincidence

when devil posts ashes is the first to comment and vice versa

mebbe dis is private mail btw these 2 guys

and if not true
then who is your target audience ?

there is no human interest story
no porn
no nuthing
only death, despair and more death

Keshi said...

So cruelly true and beautiful Ash!

Saby comments should be about the posts, not about the authors. Besides, this is Ash's blog - so don't tell him what he should write about - it's purely his choice isnt it? This is what our problem is - we think that others should follow us. Just let Ash do what he likes.

Keshi.

Jim said...

Ashes wud like to beat the shit outta me

HA!.. but he cant
he is a GEEK who never ever played football or Rugby

all the exercise he gets is for his fingers

yes, he cud finger my ass
he just threatened me on my blogg

Ashes said...

presumptions galore.

Saby,i didn't threaten ya.You aren't that damn important.

lol..and i CAN use a gun even with my fingers can't i?

Anonymous said...

see basically saby is here to tell someone what to do or not..whatever

one thing is phixed
that keshi is here for fight.lol